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Cheesy

Looks like you put a lot of time into this but some things were just terrible. I couldn't hear a word spoken and there too many spelling mistakes. The smaller graphics didn't go that well with the mountian textures either.

brilliant

That was well good ;D made me lol a lot. I look forward to working with you, Chris might have mentioned me before!

Nice

I really enjoyed it, to say it's your first movie I think you've got lots of potential. I can just suggest highering the framerate to make the tweens and fades more smoother. Good job :D

5/5

angelkoh responds:

sorry for the late reply.
thanks i'm glad u enjoyed it. :D
will upload more in future. *hugz*

hmm

Depends what you're smoking. Weed just makes you skitzophrenic and lags your brain. Tobacco does more damage :P

nice

Pretty awesome, not often I like this kind of stuff. Only thing you can do to improve it is a background and try to make the animation a bit smoother. Other than that, yeah I liked it 8D

it has potential

Here's a few tips to help you, I think you'll find them helpful.

-Don't use custom gradients, learn to make your own. They look awful with text over the top.
-Colour in the backgrounds.
-When putting text on the screen make it easier to read by using play buttons or having it last longer. Also have a text box to stop the background clipping with the letters.
-Fix the shakyness at the start of the movie.

I think if you pick up on those things and spend more time on the drawings you'll have a great scoring movie in no time. Good luck :D

thibthereaper responds:

Thanks a lot for advices !! I'll try to make it better in the next part !!

Not bad

You have to go over a few things again, because you missed some important stuff out:

You only give the option of the viewer to copy and paste the code from your tutorial, rather than telling them where to locate it internally. Didn't say how to open the library. Didn't explain the HIT frame of a button (which is the most important frame as it determines where you must click to activate the button).

If you fixed all those things and worked a bit more on the art, I would definatley reccomend this to newbs. Good luck and merry christmas :D

If you fix all this then I could say it's a pretty good tutorial :P

Loved it

I'm giving it 9/10 and voting 5. This is not only incredibly origional it must have took you a while to make. I just love the idea behind it all. I hope it does well, you deserve it!

woa

Hillarious, as usual ;D gz on the frontpage!

WilliWowza responds:

Thank you Ell, I tried hard.

fuck yeah

lmao i fucking loved it. Be prepared to have a bunch of whiney emo faggots reviewing. I hope to see more :D

I have a taste for sick animations and have taken to creating some of my own since 2012.

Ell @ottermaniac

Age 34, Male

Games Designer

UK

Joined on 9/7/03

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